ENTRY #8

Jul. 24th, 2017 05:03 pm
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Title: The Mirror DON'T LIE
Author: [personal profile] ashiiblack MOTHERFUCKER
I am of legal drinking age in my region: yes
Pairing(s)/Characters/Fandom: Harry/Draco HP VERSE
Challenge: Mirror of Erised
Summary: They look in the mirrir and want to try it
Rating/Warnings: EXPLCIT
Word count: lik 1500 words or close to it I dunno
Author's Notes (if any): I got more drunk as I wrote.

Harry couldn't believe his eyes. He was looking straight into the MIrror of Erised. He looked the same, but he was kissing someone. And they looked happy. But why? Why would he possibly want to do that?

Harry was straight. Harry was not gay. He would never kiss a boy. He definitely wouldn't kiss Draco malfoy. Mayof was a fucking wanker. He sucked. He really truly sucked.

They were in their eightth year that's important to rememer, but they were not getting along still. They hated each other.

Stupid malfoy with his stupid face. Why was mirror Harry so happy with him?

Harry watched the two of thm again, kissing. Harry was holding Draco like he was precious. Fucking Malfoy. Precious. Yeah right.

They pulled away from their kiss and stared into each other's eyes. Green on grey. Their lips curled into smiles and everything else melted away. Literally. The scene surrounding them went away and it was just the two of them with nothing else in the mirror. Harry stared at it. He wasnted that. But not with Malfoy.

NEver with Malfoy.

He stomped out of the room and walked back to the GrEat Hall. He wasn't sure how or why he had found the Mirror but it seemed important to the story so he just continued with it.

Malfoy was standing right there. What the fuck.

"Hey Malfoy come here. I want to show you something."

"Fuck you potter. I wo't go anywhere with you."

"No I'm serious. I don't want to do anything. Just look at something for me."

Malfoy glared at Harry. "Whatever. I don't hae anything else to do."

Harry led malfoy to the room and showed Malfoy the mirror. Malfoy looked cofnused and stepped up.

"It's a bloody mirror Potter. WHat the fuck else am I suppsoed to be lookingat?"

"Step right in front of the mirrr and tell me what you see."

Malfoy's eyes bugged out of his head as he stepped closer. He turned red.

"What do you see?"

"I don't want to tell you."

"Tell me."

"No>"

"I won't laugh. I saw something weird too."

"Fuck you. You tell me what you saw then. Then I might tell you."

"Us. Are you playing a trick on me?"

"Fuck you. Are you playing a trick on me? You fucking saw us?"

Harry frowned. "You didn't see us?"

Malfoy adjusted his robes. "No>"

"YOu're lying."

"Maybe."

They glared at eah other. "Come one, Malfoy. Tell me what you saw."

Malfoy kicked the mirror and crossed his arms. "I saw you doing something disguting to me."

"Were wer kissing?"

Malfoy turned red. "No. Much much worse than that."

Harry pursed his lips. This was a mystery. "This mirror is supposed to show us what we want the most. Is that what you want?"

"No."

"Well I don't want to kiss you."

"So the mirror is cursed."

"Or maybe broken."

THey stared at each other.

Malfoy was quite fit. Harry liked looking at Malfoy. He was a pointy git, but he was a hot pointy git. But Harry definitely didn't want to kiss Malfoy. He just liked looking at him.

"Potter what's going on?"

"I wonder what would happen if we did what we were doing in the mirror."

Malfoy pretended to barf. "I don't htink so. I would rather fuck Weasley."

"No you wouldn't."

"No. I wouldn't." Malfoy tiltee his head. "Why would we try to o what was in the mirror?"

Harry stepped closer to Malfoy. "We looked like we were enjoying it. All of my kisses have been terrible. Maybe I'll like this."

"But Potter you hate me."

"Yeah."

Malfoy got closer too. "We did seem to be having a lot of fun. And I haven't had fun in ages."

"Yeah I don't think you have a lot of fun even now that voldrmot is deatd."

"Yeah."

They kissed and Harry knew that this was truly his heart's diesire. THey kissed for a really long time, openig up their mouths and sticking their tongues in it. THey got more passionate, kissing forever and their moans were getting swallowed up by the kiss. Harry never knew kissing could be so hot. He hated it with Cho and it was Okay with Ginny but this was way better. Harry felt arousal pooling in his gut and he knew he was going to go all the way with Malfoy.

They kissed more but Harry had pushed Draco into the wall for more leverage. Harry wasn't sure where he ended and Draco began because they were thay close. Harry stroked Draco's side and they were kissing and it was still really good and really hot.

He was so turned on he didn't care when Draco reached for Harry's prick.

Prick prick prick.

Harry moaned and ended the kiss eventually because he couldn't focus on two things at once. Draco palmed Harry through his clothing and Harry decided that was unacceptable.

"Accio bed."

A bed showed up next to the mirror and Draco took a moment to appreciate Harry's magical prowess.

"Nice Potter. Tell me what are you going to do to me on that bed?"

"I'm going to fuck you."

"Okay."

They fell to the bed kissing again and Draco spelled off Harry's clothing so he was completely naked.

"I want to see what you look like naked."

"Okay open your eyes."

Draco's eyes raked over Harry's body. He felt kind of embarrassed but he let him do it annywasy. After all if they were going to have sex he should be able to get seen naked. It made sense

Draco climbed onto the bed too and took off his own clothes too. Harry liked Draco's hard cock. It was hot. THey were just staring at each toher breathing heavily. It was hot.

He was super turned on so Harry just used lubricus. He had only used that spell on himself before but he hoped that was enough.

Draco pointed his wand at his arse and loosened it. Harry was confused but draco said he should just go with it.

Harry lined himself up at draco's entrance - he didn't have to use a condom because they were wizards and wizards don't get stis like muggles. That's convenient. And hot. But safe sex should happen with muggles always. Unless you really want barebaking.

Okay

So Draco took all of Harry's cock. Harry was overwhelmed by the feeling of Draco's insides. He groaned.

"Draco you're so hot. I can't take it."

Draco canted his hips back and forth. Harry knew that draco was enjoying himse,f so he started moving too.

THe sensation was brilliant. Why would Harry ever need to fuck a woman when there was Draco's perfect arse to fuck?

They fucked in tandem, back and forth, up and down.

Draco was on his back, then on his stomach. They kept changing positoons and Harry had amazing stamina. He just kept fucking Draco over and over.

Soon enough Draco agreed that tehy looked llike what he had seen in the mirror. Harry wasn't sure why Draco had seen the sex and Harry had seen the kissing and why they decided to do both but they kept going anyways, fucking and enjoying each other's bodies.

Harry liked licking Draco because he kept shivering even though they were dripping sweat. Draco tasted like apples. Maybe it was his soap.

Eventually, they both drew close to their orgasm. Hakrry decided to help Draco out and jerk him off so they could come together. Harry liked the feeling of Draco's cock in his hands.

They came close tot he same time. Harry was amaed at watching Draco come undone, it was the best thing ever. He nearly sobbed with relief as he came, spattering come on their bodies. Harry pushed all the way into Draco and came, collapsoing onto Draco as he shot his wad indo draco's arse.

They were lying there for a while just breathing and eventually draco decided to speak.

"Harry you are crushing me."

"Shit sorry Draco."

"I like calling you Harry."

"You can keep calling my Harry. I can call you Draco now right?"

"We fucked like the mirror told us to right?"

Harry nodded. "Yeah. THat's what it was."

They laid in bed for longer. It was comfortable and warm and Harry could finally admit he was in love with Draco Malfoy and had been for years and years.

THE END

Date: 2017-07-24 11:25 pm (UTC)
alisanne: (Default)
From: [personal profile] alisanne
OMG, this was so sweet!
And Draco tasted like apples! <3
This was just adorable. :)
That Mirror def DON'T LIE. *g*

Date: 2017-07-30 03:04 pm (UTC)
ashiiblack: (Default)
From: [personal profile] ashiiblack
:) Thank you! I forgot how much fun drunk writing is!

Date: 2017-07-24 11:52 pm (UTC)
lq_traintracks: (Default)
From: [personal profile] lq_traintracks
Awwwwww! Okay, I think I guffawed reading this! :D This here is my new favorite moment:

"I wonder what would happen if we did what we were doing in the mirror."

Malfoy pretended to barf. "I don't htink so. I would rather fuck Weasley."

"No you wouldn't."

"No. I wouldn't."


ROTFLMAO!

Also with this:

"I want to see what you look like naked."

"Okay open your eyes."


I added 'dumb shit' to the end of Harry's line. I couldn't help myself! LOLOL! "Okay open your eyes, dumb shit." It works, no? :D

This still managed to be impossibly sweet while it was hilariously funny! I adore their extremely matter-of-fact decisions to explore kissing and doing it. :DDD Lovely job!

Date: 2017-07-30 03:06 pm (UTC)
ashiiblack: (Default)
From: [personal profile] ashiiblack
Lmao "dumb shit" would have worked perfectly there!

I'm glad you enjoyed the read!

Date: 2017-07-24 11:52 pm (UTC)
ruinsplume: (Default)
From: [personal profile] ruinsplume
OH my god. this was like Ernest Hemingway writes Drarry. Seriously. I could not stop laughing!

Date: 2017-07-25 02:31 am (UTC)
lq_traintracks: (Default)
From: [personal profile] lq_traintracks
OH my god. this was like Ernest Hemingway writes Drarry.

THIS!!! LOLOL!

Date: 2017-07-30 03:14 pm (UTC)
ashiiblack: (Default)
From: [personal profile] ashiiblack
OMG this comment is hysterical and also super flattering (because I love Hemingway)! <3<3<3

Date: 2017-07-25 02:19 am (UTC)
sdk: A great white shark about to breach with a rainbow filter and text that reads sdk (Default)
From: [personal profile] sdk
"We fucked like the mirror told us to right?"

Hahahahahaa. Yes yes. Just like the mirror told you to. Haha! This and just how like Harry automatically had amazing stamina, and no one needed protection because they were wizards, duh, and just the whole "I hate you, but lets try kissing" hahahahahaha. That was completely precious. innocent precious hilarious smut.

Date: 2017-07-30 03:15 pm (UTC)
ashiiblack: (Default)
From: [personal profile] ashiiblack
innocent precious hilarious smut

That's what I was going for. I think?

Writing HP sex is so much more convenient than other fandoms. Bam, lubricus. Bam, stretching spell. Bam, wizards don't get STIs.

Glad you enjoyed it!

Date: 2017-07-25 05:19 am (UTC)
shaddyr: (Harry_shock)
From: [personal profile] shaddyr
Harry lined himself up at draco's entrance - he didn't have to use a condom because they were wizards and wizards don't get stis like muggles. That's convenient. And hot. But safe sex should happen with muggles always. Unless you really want barebaking.

Okay.


*weakly flaps hand in general direction of fic*

*wheeze*

*dies of laughter*

Date: 2017-07-25 06:00 am (UTC)
vengeance_on_ice: Cute but Psycho (Default)
From: [personal profile] vengeance_on_ice
Ditto. I, too, have died of laughter from reading this!

Date: 2017-07-30 03:17 pm (UTC)
ashiiblack: (Default)
From: [personal profile] ashiiblack
I remember being really serious when I was writing this part - I NEEDED to write this PSA. It was so important to drunk Ashii.

So happy I made you laugh!

Date: 2017-07-30 07:49 pm (UTC)
shaddyr: (Default)
From: [personal profile] shaddyr
It struck me as exceedingly hilarious when I read it, and I just could *not* stop laughing for the life of me.

Date: 2017-07-25 06:03 am (UTC)
vengeance_on_ice: Cute but Psycho (Default)
From: [personal profile] vengeance_on_ice
He was so turned on he didn't care when Draco reached for Harry's prick.

Prick prick prick.


Prick prick prick. Ahahahahhahahahahaaaaa!!!!!! This is possibly my favorite line from all of the FWF entries of this round. I think I am dead now, and it's your fault.

Date: 2017-07-30 03:18 pm (UTC)
ashiiblack: (Default)
From: [personal profile] ashiiblack
YESSSSS!

I recently received a comment that I used "prick" too many times in a fic (the word is offensive apparently?) and I was feeling spiteful. :P

Prick prick prick

Date: 2017-07-25 09:28 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] kiertorata
He was a pointy git, but he was a hot pointy git.

Well it seems that both of them got over their issues very quickly :D Atta boys!

Harry lined himself up at draco's entrance - he didn't have to use a condom because they were wizards and wizards don't get stis like muggles. That's convenient. And hot. But safe sex should happen with muggles always. Unless you really want barebaking.

LOLOLOLOL very important fyi just there!

Date: 2017-07-30 03:19 pm (UTC)
ashiiblack: (Default)
From: [personal profile] ashiiblack
"Barebaking" should only happen if they REALLY want it.

I vaguely recall thinking about how conveniently they got over their animosity and then just not giving a shit about it lol.

Thanks for reading! <3

Date: 2017-07-26 09:51 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] bixgirl1
I had too, too many favorite parts to this. I was loving their back and forth denial of being interested in what they saw in the mirror, and then I came to "prick, prick, prick." Which I agree, was important enough to reiterate. LOL.

Also? I appreciated every goddamned thing about this section:

Harry lined himself up at draco's entrance - he didn't have to use a condom because they were wizards and wizards don't get stis like muggles. That's convenient. And hot. But safe sex should happen with muggles always. Unless you really want barebaking.

Okay

So Draco took all of Harry's cock. Harry was overwhelmed by the feeling of Draco's insides.


Very impressive observations. (btw, I'm dying here as I reread.)

AND THEN there was Harry and Draco's amazing stamina. JFC, that was... Wow. A lot of sex. Like, so, so much sex. Which is also always appreciated, but just... Wow. LMAO.

Awesome entry, drunken anon! :D

Date: 2017-07-30 03:27 pm (UTC)
ashiiblack: (Default)
From: [personal profile] ashiiblack
Thank you! SO MUCH SEX. SO MUCH STAMINA.

These are generally the notes I leave in my drafts and then return to write the actual sex. Apparently drunk me decided that it was good enough. :P

Date: 2017-07-30 03:28 pm (UTC)
ashiiblack: (Default)
From: [personal profile] ashiiblack
I didn't realize how sweet this fic was until I got all of these comments describing it as sweet...so I re-read and was like wow I wrote this?

(honestly by looking at the headers I didn't even remember which fic was mine at first)

Date: 2017-07-28 07:31 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] lightofdaye
You had me from the CAPS LOCK FOR EMPHASIS in the header! XD
Edited Date: 2017-07-28 07:31 pm (UTC)

Date: 2017-07-30 03:29 pm (UTC)
ashiiblack: (Default)
From: [personal profile] ashiiblack
Lmao italics were too difficult so I defaulted to capslock!

Date: 2017-07-30 03:49 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] songquake
and everything else melted away. Literally

"The Persistence of Memory," anyone?

Harry lined himself up at draco's entrance - he didn't have to use a condom because they were wizards and wizards don't get stis like muggles. That's convenient. And hot. But safe sex should happen with muggles always. Unless you really want barebaking.

1. Thank you for the PSA!
2. Thank you for the barebaking!

This is a very sweet story, MA! And I loved the commentary, sparse as it was, it was very effective!

Date: 2017-07-30 03:32 pm (UTC)
ashiiblack: (Default)
From: [personal profile] ashiiblack
Thank you! I've recently started writing for the Yuri on Ice fandom and condoms are incredibly difficult to fit in after writing HP for like...15 years.

I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Date: 2017-07-30 05:24 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] evening12
oh my gosh. This is hilarious. Loved this part "He wasn't sure how or why he had found the Mirror but it seemed important to the story so he just continued with it." Breaking the 4th wall lol

And Harry accio-ing a bed lol. I want to see more of that in fanfics. I think it should become a fandom trope. :p

Bahahaha. Lubricus. Spells that loosen arses. Lol

And somehow the sex made Harry realize that he had been in love with Draco forever. lol

I'm so happy that you wrote this story. It was good fun to read.

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