ENTRY #12

Jul. 5th, 2022 09:16 am
torino10154: Glass of firewhiskey (Firewhiskeyfic)
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Title:  Insomnia is Not the Agent (the “Satisfaction is the Agent” Remix)
Author: [personal profile] ride_4ever 
I am of legal drinking age in my region: Yes, and I have been for decades
Pairings: Benton Fraser/Stella Kowalski; Benton Fraser/Ray Kowalski
Characters: Benton Fraser, Stella Kowalski, Ray Kowalski
Fandom: due South (and mention of Harry Potter canon)
Prompts used: Rosmerta, Hog's Head, marathon, insomnia, forced proximity, one too many
Summary:  Fraser and Stella "in carnal embrace" and what follows when Ray sees them that way.
Rating: Sexually Explict; No AO3-type warnings apply
Word count: 541
Author notes: I always try to use every single one of the prompts, and yeah, I did it again
 

 When Constable Benton Fraser opened the Canadian Consulate door after hours to Stella Kowalski, he could not have imagined anywhere in his fantasies (unrequited fantasies which were entirely about the other Kowalski, Ray Kowalski) that within the hour he would have acquiesced to Stella’s sexual aggression…but there they are making use of the Consulate’s guest washroom in a way that was never intended: Stella braced forward against the rounded polished-wood edge of the sink with her skirt hiked up, Fraser behind her with his pants partway down, rocking in and out of her wetness as Stella hisses “make me come, make me come”. 

  

Fraser and Stella actually quite dislike each other, and there in the heat of that dislike is what he thinks makes her possibly the only one who is “safe” for him, who wouldn’t hurt him and who he wouldn’t hurt, because where there is no love there will be no loss. Also, perhaps perversely, Fraser seeks a kind of  

intimacy-in-absentia with Ray by being where Ray has intimately been. 

 

Fraser has been so touch-starved --he tries to prolong the sensations, and it’s too slow and too controlled for what Stella wants.  She throatily commands “Damn it, make me come, Constable!” and Fraser reacts to the command tone, going from taking her like gentling a mare to riding her hard like a bronco.  

 

As Stella cries out in orgasm and Fraser groans his release, they fail to hear the soft snick of Ray Kowalski’s credit card unlatching the Consulate door.  

 

It’s like Ray Kowalski’s brain short-circuits. How can he hold these two thoughts in his mind at once? The two people he loves most in the world, his ex-wife who he thinks will never make love with him again and the man who he thinks will just never make love with him…and they are fucking each other?! 

 

This abruptly forced proximity to Fraser and Stella in carnal embrace stuns Ray into stillness even though he wants to take off like a marathon runner, and he wishes he could unsee this image of one too many objects of his love and desire juxtaposed. Wildly he thinks what if one of them is Rosmerta and one is Draco Malfoy, but who Imperiused whom? Then no, because persons of great will and character can resist that Curse – and Ray has a type – persons of great will and character…like Stella and Fraser. 

 

Stella turns her head and sees Ray. Unflustered, she disengages from Fraser, straightens her attire, and says “Done with that. Now you boys can both work out that who you really want is each other.” 

 

When Fraser turns his head to look at Ray, first it’s a look of pure shock, and then shame, embarrassment, trepidation, and – when he sees Ray’s pupils dilate at the sight of Fraser’s big uncut Canadian Hog’s Head – hopefulness. 

 

Ray recovers his powers of speech and says “Stel, the boss of the bedroom even when you aren’t in it. Fraser, pull up your pants and come home with me.” 

 

Back at Ray’s apartment, in Ray’s bed, Benton and Ray are very much sleepless in Chicago –there are various positionings and repositionings, a variety of moans and groans – and insomnia is not the agent. 

Date: 2022-07-05 06:02 pm (UTC)
ruinsplume: (Default)
From: [personal profile] ruinsplume
Wow, this is like the opposite of cockblocking, if that's a thing? I don't know this fandom but I really liked how you wrote the characters, and especially this line: even though he wants to take off like a marathon runner, and he wishes he could unsee this image of one too many objects of his love and desire juxtaposed.

Stella?!

Date: 2022-07-06 10:08 pm (UTC)
oldtoadwoman: Sam Winchester, Supernatural 14x17 (Default)
From: [personal profile] oldtoadwoman

big uncut Canadian Hog’s Head

Bwahahaha!

Date: 2022-07-07 06:06 am (UTC)
mywitch: (Default)
From: [personal profile] mywitch
I love it - two sillies in love who need someone to point it out - one of my favorite story lines.

And this: Fraser’s big uncut Canadian Hog’s Head YESSSSS :D

Date: 2022-07-07 09:47 pm (UTC)
lq_traintracks: (Default)
From: [personal profile] lq_traintracks
I don't know the fandom, but now I want to! Fabulous!!

Date: 2022-07-08 04:31 am (UTC)
sdk: A great white shark about to breach with a rainbow filter and text that reads sdk (Default)
From: [personal profile] sdk
Yes please, the best use of Hog's Head for sure! XD I love how you slipped in some HP in there, but what I most love is that even though I don't go here, I was fully invested in this! Love the... well I was going to say hate sex, but more like dislike sex?? And I love Stella afterwards being like... okay you two, get your shit together and fuck each other now please LOL.

Date: 2022-07-08 05:54 am (UTC)
ride_4ever: (WriSo Sour)
From: [personal profile] ride_4ever
Quite an example of prompts promoting drunken creativity!

Date: 2022-07-08 08:35 pm (UTC)
lightofdaye: (Default)
From: [personal profile] lightofdaye
Awesome and efficient use of prompts. Nothing about the fandom aside from firewhiskeyfics I'm going to assume they canonically always talk about hogwarts house and which character they are during sex ;)

Nice work MA

Date: 2022-07-08 09:28 pm (UTC)
corvidology: Ophelia and goldfish (Default)
From: [personal profile] corvidology
*applauds the way you managed work Rosmerta and Draco in there* :D

Date: 2022-07-10 02:21 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] songquake
STELLA IS AMAZING.

Also amazing? This description: Fraser’s big uncut Canadian Hog’s Head

GodDAMN.

This is a terrific little ficlet, MA! I love Fraser's internal torment and then RAY's torment and how Stella's just a manipulative bitch here. Nice. Thank you!

Date: 2022-07-13 06:18 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] paulamcg
So sorry I'm late commenting. Your storytelling is fabulously effective, and that includes the delightful use of the prompts. You make me feel for your touch-starved Fraser, and when Ray arrives, it's wonderfully fitting to change the perspective with such words as How can he hold these two thoughts in his mind at once :)

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