ENTRY #2

Oct. 4th, 2022 09:30 am
torino10154: Glass of firewhiskey (Firewhiskeyfic)
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Title:witching hour
Author: [personal profile] lightofdaye
I am of legal drinking age in my region: Yvery Y
Pairing(s)/Characters/Fandom: Harry Potter (fandom), Hermione/Neville (pariinfs)
Challenge/Prompts used: technically all.
Summary:Hermione appears at neville's late at night.
Rating/Warnings: nc-17, hetereonormative vaginal sex in many positions and cunnilingus
Word count:1,321
Author's Notes (if any): this was supposed to be pwp and it is and yet it's sitll somehow half set up. wth muse?


it was the witching housr when hermione appareated near to bnvlle’s hours. She missed her mark, appearing in a graveyard a short way awy from her home. She wound er way through the grave stone s and knocking on Neville’s door.

There were jack o lanterns strewn all over neville’s garden, their faces visibly improving from the oldest examples, to the newest which were much more elaborate.

The door swung open and Neville beamed at her from within though Hermione (that;s a terrible character to pcik tfor fwf c’mon think) thought he looked a little surprised as well.

“sorry to call so late “ she said “i was stuck at a harvesrt party at godric’s hollow for ages.”

“a harvest party?” Neville said.

“yes, a party. Celebrating the harvest. Nearly hadless nick was talking my ear off and I ouldn’t get away.”

2nearly headless nick was at a harvest day party in godric’s hollow.”

“where else wouldh be?” Hermione asked.

Neville blinked and with nearly all of the prompts cleared away with, he stepped away from the foor and lwt her into his cottage.

Hermione followd him in smiling as the author had a difficult time transitiioning from the set up to the smut,

neville’s cottage was a smaller affair only a few room and most of the first floor (that’s the upper one of tht wo for americans) was taken up with a bedroom with a big but worn double bed that hermione knew from experience to be immensely comfortable.

“and that was just the long part of a long and tiring week, the last part as well” herminoe said as the door closed behind her. “So here I am.”

“here to bewitch me with your bewhiling ways?” neviile saked just to make sure that tpomrpt wa definitely in there.

“do oou need it?” hermione said theatrically patting he rpcokets “i’ve got my wand here somewher”

“you don’t need you want to bewitch me” neville said, is arms wrapping around her middle to pull her close. “you manage that fine all by your swelf” he leant down a bit and kissed her. Hermione went on her tipytoes to deepen it her arms going around his neck, on hand up entangld in his fin sliky brown hair as she was pulled close to his chest.

After she and ron had broke up she had ended up in a casual thing with neville. Whi had had a thing for her for almost as long as ron if zhe remembered the yule ball correctly. It certainly beat out going with anyone with any connection to slytherin house for sure. Neville was sweet and yo would think wuite biddable but the confidence he’d gain over the years of the books teaching at hogwarts and elft whim with a certain amount o quiet elf condience and h e was more than willing to throw a lady down and ravish her mercilessly so long as that was what the lady in question wanted.

And isnce hermioe was the lady in question and she did want that everything was fine.

Hermione was pulled tight to neville’s chest, and snogged him passionat, her tongue delving into his mouth as nhos hand ventured down to her bum, cupping nad squeeing and groping her arse to his heart’s content as she moaned wantonly into his mouth/

“fuck,” she gasped into her mouth “Fuck, I ant to...”

“fuck?2 neville asked with a shy smile as hermione’s usually sophisticated vocabulary failed her.

“exactly.”

they headed upstairs exchanging kisses avery few steps while aslo discarding most of their clothes in ways thst it’s too complicate to easily descripbe in fic so we can graceful elidate over it with this transition.

Once they were in the bedroom, neville through hermiobne down on to he bed, old and soft she sank inoto it and neville came down on top of her. It oculd have been sacry with neville weight ontop her; it wasn’t.

They snogged, hermione arms around his middle, her fingers dugging into neville’s back, her legs spreadwide, so th bulging front of his boxers pressed again the barely there lace of her knickers.

Hermion moaned and gasped all facillity for complicated language lost to her as she swurimed and writhed underneath neville. Her head raised her neck arched, presenting her thoat for neville to nibble and suck upon.

Neville worked down hier body in standard verhion, placing hisses on her shoulders, tugging at the straps of the bra she was wearing with his teeth to pull it down, bore ucking on her drk brown nipples that didn’t specify race either way of course. He hefted herelf off to place more kisses across her soft stomache her legs ere already spread wide whne he reached between the ot remove of kncikers and unviel a bushy patc hier hair their. He lapped at her wet cunt eager, even as those loegs closed again, tight around hier head, his stron g grip on holding no to her thigh and hoiseting them u p to drape over his shoulders as he applied his tnouge in soft swirlong motions over her ciit, causing hermione to wail and cry out and gushed ver the fingers he pushed into her as she came. She felt on the bod bed limply with her climax but was soon ready to go again as neville ficard his bocers which were the lat reamind piece of clothig ither of them were wearing.

Not quite welling to let neville do all the work hermione switched their position so he was seated on the bed and she was kneeling between hs ack, she wrapped her mouth about hs cock, sicking it while her hands cupped his balls and stroked his shaft coaxing him until he was hurd fully hard and immpressively long and thick.

Ir was slightly indimitatig straddling that cock but it was not like she hadn’t done it before. She placed one hand on neville’s chest and directed hs cokc at her pssy with the other and then she she slowly implaed herself pon it. She wnet cross eyed by the time she was hal way down she was sure but by then neville’s strong hands were on her elg and her hip supoorting and guiding her down. She gasped as she came to wrest fully down on him, the nstarted to rotate her hips, turning in more in sideways and back and forth on that up and dwn while she got used to it before starting to bounce her down and up on it. She couldn’t last log ng in thi sposition before commin g against and slumping across neville’s chest in a satiated heap, uite happ y to let t sleep the restof the night to be.

But it was not to be. Five minutes later she was on her hnads nad lnees. Throwing her hips back as neville ploughed into her from behind or perhaps plowed? Either way he had one hand on her hips and the other gripping as big a bunch of her vushy borwn hair as he could urging her backwards.

20 minutea afters that she was on her back again, with her hips upturned, her legs hooked over neville’s houlder as he filled her colmpletely an uteterly as she hoarlse moaned words of endearments.

An hour after that they were spooned together, with neville planting kisses on the side of her fac,e her neck and shoulder, he was barley moving his hips now, slowly fucking her from behind, while a free hand reached her to play at her clit, seeing I her could tease her into another orgasm.

He might just mange it as well.

By the time morning came, hermione had lost count of how many orgasms she and neville hd ahared, hadn’t had an hour’s consequetuve sleep was going to be absolutely shattered and exhausted for days.

And she just couldn’t be happier about it.

Date: 2022-10-04 07:25 pm (UTC)
lq_traintracks: (Default)
From: [personal profile] lq_traintracks
I love it! It was very hot! My favorite part though was Neville’s quiet elf confidence. 😂👍. And how you lamented using Hermione for this because of all the ways you could mangle her name while drunk. And the hand-wavy transitions! Very FWF! I really enjoyed this!!

Date: 2022-10-10 08:09 pm (UTC)
lightofdaye: (Default)
From: [personal profile] lightofdaye
Elves are clearly noted for their confidence after all!

I was told I had to use Hermione after short changing her last time XD

Thanks for reading

Date: 2022-10-10 08:20 pm (UTC)
lq_traintracks: (Default)
From: [personal profile] lq_traintracks
For real! Hermione deserves good smut! :D

Date: 2022-10-05 06:24 am (UTC)
oldtoadwoman: Sam Winchester, Supernatural 14x17 (writing 2)
From: [personal profile] oldtoadwoman

Neville blinked and with nearly all of the prompts cleared away with, he stepped away from the foor and lwt her into his cottage.

::snorffle::

A classic Firewhiskey fic indeed.

Re: ♥

Date: 2022-10-10 08:10 pm (UTC)
lightofdaye: (Default)
From: [personal profile] lightofdaye
Sometimes the prompts prompt elements and idea for the fic, sometimes you just need to name drop them quick and get on with some smut, lol.

Cheers :D

Date: 2022-10-05 04:56 pm (UTC)
sabethea: (Default)
From: [personal profile] sabethea
I love the transitions between parts, they’re beautifully done. And then you get some gorgeous sex also, even with interesting spelling!

Date: 2022-10-10 08:11 pm (UTC)
lightofdaye: (Default)
From: [personal profile] lightofdaye
thanks so much! FWF is so fun in that encourages tongue-in-cheek bits like that.

Date: 2022-10-06 12:09 pm (UTC)
maesterchill: Art by me (Default)
From: [personal profile] maesterchill
All the typos are very amusing as well as the asides, and the sex was fab - sounds like a perfectly steamy night together!!!

Date: 2022-10-10 08:11 pm (UTC)
lightofdaye: (Default)
From: [personal profile] lightofdaye
Cheers! They absolutely had a lot of fun. Though maybe not as detailed as if I'd written it sober.

Date: 2022-10-06 08:08 pm (UTC)
paulamcg: (Default)
From: [personal profile] paulamcg
Oh, I'm sure you'd have managed quite excellently to descripbe also the discarding of clothing, no matter how complicated, if you hadn't been in a hurry to show in detail all the positions in which Hermione swurimed etc.

Date: 2022-10-10 08:12 pm (UTC)
lightofdaye: (Default)
From: [personal profile] lightofdaye
Thanks for the vote of confidence! It's definitely fun to be able to just handwave that kind of thing though.

Date: 2022-10-08 05:49 am (UTC)
ride_4ever: (WriSo Sour)
From: [personal profile] ride_4ever
The very essence of FWF: smut and incoherence!

Also, I really <3 all that "breaking the fourth wall" you did, plus kudos on using ALL the prompts and especially on getting TWO prompts into ONE sentence ("harvest party at Godric's Hollow").

Date: 2022-10-10 08:12 pm (UTC)
lightofdaye: (Default)
From: [personal profile] lightofdaye
Hey, I do smut and incoherence sober I'll have you know! ;)

And thanks. I did clear them away rather fast this time to get to the real point of the fun!

Date: 2022-10-11 04:35 am (UTC)
ride_4ever: (Fraser - facepalm)
From: [personal profile] ride_4ever
LOL at your "smut and incoherence sober" remark! Me, I still have a long way to go and a lot of drinks to drink before I'm ever really in competition for the coveted "Least Coherent" Award.

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