ENTRY #12

Jan. 25th, 2022 10:31 am
torino10154: Glass of firewhiskey (Firewhiskeyfic)
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 Title: Father and Child Reunion (Is Only a Moment Away)

Author:[personal profile] ride_4ever

I am of legal drinking age in my region: so very yes 

Pairing(s)/Characters/Fandom: Fraser/Kowalski in due South

Challenge/Prompts used: Dad, plugs, tinker (each used TWICE)

Summary: father-son interactions

Rating/Warnings: Teen and up; no warnings apply

Word count: 620

Author's Notes: written under the influence of several Moscow Mules; title taken from the Paul Simon song “Mother and Child Reunion” with no copyright infringement intended






Ray Kowalski and his dad are tinkering with the spark plugs in the GTO. Ray is really happy that he and his dad are on speaking terms again and bonding over car maintenance like they used to do. Good thing that Damian Kowalski isn’t a mind-reader though, because this is Ray’s car maintenance brain on sex – everything nowadays makes him think about his unrequited longing for Benton Fraser, his cop partner and best friend. 

Misfiring Motor: an engine will misfire when bad spark plugs delay the combustion effect – a misfire means a cylinder in your engine is not producing the power it should – it may lead to long-term damage if you don’t fix the problem. C’mon Fraser, you know there’s a spark between us just waiting for combustion. C’mon c’mon, my cylinder is not getting the chance to produce the power it should, and it’s gonna lead to long-term damage!

Engine Knocking: while accelerating you will hear your engine making a knocking sound – that sound is caused by your spark plugs not detonating properly and not igniting all the fuel. The fuel and vapor that did not ignite will eventually catch fire and detonate, causing that knocking sound in your engine. Fraser! Fraser! That knocking sound? The knocking sound I want to hear is the sound of us knocking boots! And nnrrgghh what it does to me when I think of your Mountie boots! That leather hugging your firm muscled calves. C’mon you are not giving me the chance to detonate properly and ignite all my fuel!

Rough Idling: a delayed spark makes it harder for your engine to idle properly. Yeah Fraser, I’d like it rough with you, but not rough idling – these feelings I got for you, these delays on the spark between us, are definitely messing with my engine.

Hard-starting Engine: if your car is hard to start, you might have bad spark plugs -- your engine needs strong sparks to get all cylinders firing on time -- a new set of plugs and wires might be needed. So Fraser, what? I know there’s strong sparks between us! What new thing do I need to get us firing together at the same time?

Engine Hesitating: the engine may hesitate while accelerating, which occurs when the engine is not responding to the driver – this occurs when the engine is sucking in more air than it should during the combustion process, causing a delay in power delivery. C’mon Fraser! Thinking about sucking when I’m thinking about “hesitation while accelerating” and “delay in power delivery” is making me crazy! 

~*~ ~*~ ~*~

Meanwhile, the ghost of Fraser’s dad has a few things to say…as always.

“You know, Son, I don’t mean to be tinkering with your relationships....”

“Oh, of course you do, Dad. It’s like now that you’re dead you want a hand in everything.”

“Well, perhaps it’s just that being dead has allowed me to see a bigger picture. I’d like to plug the gaps in our relationship…grandchildren would be nice…and not something the Yank can provide. “

“Really, Dad, this is bordering on embarrassing…”

“If you only knew what he is thinking about you while spending time with his father!”

“Oh dear! Don’t tell me you’ve been eavesdropping on them!”

“Alright then – I won’t tell you. But I will tell you this – he wants you in that ‘partnership is like a marriage’ way. And I want you tell me this! Do you feel the way he feels?”

“Well…ah…yes.”

“Then, like our RCMP motto says: ‘Go get your man!’ “

“That’s really not our motto, Dad. It’s ‘Maintiens le droit,’ ‘Maintain the right.’ “

“Then never mind the motto and go get him anyways…and think about adoption options for same-sex couples."

Date: 2022-01-25 09:17 pm (UTC)
dani_meows: (drinking)
From: [personal profile] dani_meows
I have no idea anything about these characters since I don't recognize the fandom.

“You know, Son, I don’t mean to be tinkering with your relationships....” This sentence made me giggle I love your usage of tinker.

And the rest of it is really accepting and sweet. Very cute!

Date: 2022-02-01 06:20 am (UTC)
ride_4ever: (TYK)
From: [personal profile] ride_4ever
Thank you kindly for reading and commenting! (This icon is a pic of Constable Benton Fraser, RCMP...the Fraser of my fic.)

Date: 2022-01-25 11:44 pm (UTC)
corvidology: Ophelia and goldfish (Default)
From: [personal profile] corvidology
I really like the parallel stories and the engine manual references... I mean, Fraser is a well oiled machine. :D
Edited Date: 2022-01-26 04:00 am (UTC)

Date: 2022-02-01 06:23 am (UTC)
ride_4ever: (Fraser - not empty trousered ANIMATED)
From: [personal profile] ride_4ever
Thank you kindly for reading and commenting.

And LOL for the part where you said "Fraser is a well-oiled machine" (actually, I've read some fic where that is literally true....).

Date: 2022-01-26 01:27 am (UTC)
digthewriter: (Default)
From: [personal profile] digthewriter
Oh I dont know this fandom at all but this was fun to read! Thanks for writing it for the fest. Well done.

Date: 2022-02-01 06:25 am (UTC)
ride_4ever: (TYK)
From: [personal profile] ride_4ever
Thank you kindly for reading and commenting! (This icon is a pic of Constable Benton Fraser, RCMP...the Fraser of my fic.)

Date: 2022-01-26 05:50 am (UTC)
songquake: (Default)
From: [personal profile] songquake
1. This is an excellent intro story for the many FWF readers who don’t watch/read DS. Just, you gave us everything we would need to make this story work, and I really appreciate it. If you or big on the HP fandom, I hope those of us who wrote HP did as good a job showing you who our people are to each other.

2. The structure of this is really tight, first building so much sexual tension over CAR PARTS and then giving us some great levity with a dash of “maybe they’ll get off their asses and knock boots already” hope. Excellent work, MA!

Date: 2022-02-01 06:29 am (UTC)
ride_4ever: (TYK)
From: [personal profile] ride_4ever
Thank you kindly for reading and also for the extensive commenting! Very happy to know this could be seen as an intro to dS. As far as HP, although I haven't been in that fandom (yet) I do know some of the HP canon and the HP vibe here does make me want more.

Date: 2022-01-26 05:49 pm (UTC)
sdk: A great white shark about to breach with a rainbow filter and text that reads sdk (Default)
From: [personal profile] sdk
Oh this is so cute!! The conversation at the end had me grinning but all of the innuendos with the car trouble=sexual tension were brilliant and so well done!! I don't go here, but I absolutely love it here! <3

Date: 2022-02-01 06:30 am (UTC)
ride_4ever: (TYK)
From: [personal profile] ride_4ever
Thank you kindly for reading and commenting! (This icon is a pic of Constable Benton Fraser, RCMP...the Fraser of my fic.)

Date: 2022-01-26 08:06 pm (UTC)
lightofdaye: (Default)
From: [personal profile] lightofdaye
Plugs as in spark plugs! That's a really ingenious interpretation and I loved the way you interwove the mechanical jargon with the shipping material.

Good job, MA. :)

Date: 2022-02-01 06:30 am (UTC)
ride_4ever: (TYK)
From: [personal profile] ride_4ever
Thank you kindly for reading and commenting! (This icon is a pic of Constable Benton Fraser, RCMP...the Fraser of my fic.)

Date: 2022-01-27 02:42 am (UTC)
lq_traintracks: (Default)
From: [personal profile] lq_traintracks
Ahhh, I just love the car repair instruction manual style and the puns you used! This was really lovely and also funny and sweet! :D

Date: 2022-02-01 06:31 am (UTC)
ride_4ever: (TYK)
From: [personal profile] ride_4ever
Thank you kindly for reading and commenting! (This icon is a pic of Constable Benton Fraser, RCMP...the Fraser of my fic.)

Date: 2022-02-01 06:32 am (UTC)
ride_4ever: (TYK)
From: [personal profile] ride_4ever
Thank you kindly for reading and commenting! (This icon is a pic of Constable Benton Fraser, RCMP...the Fraser of my fic.)

Date: 2022-01-27 04:35 pm (UTC)
paulamcg: (Default)
From: [personal profile] paulamcg
What a wonderful pair of tinkering scenes! You've taught me a lot about engines as well as about characters I've never met before, and there's a lovely tension.

Date: 2022-02-01 06:32 am (UTC)
ride_4ever: (TYK)
From: [personal profile] ride_4ever
Thank you kindly for reading and commenting! (This icon is a pic of Constable Benton Fraser, RCMP...the Fraser of my fic.)

Date: 2022-01-27 05:24 pm (UTC)
ruinsplume: (Default)
From: [personal profile] ruinsplume
I don't know this fandom, but this was delightful to read and so well constructed (especially given the Moscow mules!) I loved the playful rising tension and the supportive ghost dad. thanks for giving me a peek into this fandom!

Date: 2022-02-01 06:34 am (UTC)
ride_4ever: (TYK)
From: [personal profile] ride_4ever
Thank you kindly for reading and commenting! (This icon is a pic of Constable Benton Fraser, RCMP...the Fraser of my fic.)

And I'd better have something more or something stronger than those Moscow Mules next FWF given that I got the "Most Coherent" award. LOL.

Date: 2022-01-27 06:16 pm (UTC)
mywitch: (Default)
From: [personal profile] mywitch
I love Simon and Garfunkel so you’ve already won me over with the title!
I appreciate the setup and the clarity at the end, since I’m not (yet) familiar with Due South.
I loved this! All the interesting information about how motors worked interspersed with Fraser’s longing for his partner! Really sweet!

Date: 2022-02-01 06:35 am (UTC)
ride_4ever: (TYK)
From: [personal profile] ride_4ever
Thank you kindly for reading and commenting! (This icon is a pic of Constable Benton Fraser, RCMP...the Fraser of my fic.)

Date: 2022-01-28 03:14 am (UTC)
oldtoadwoman: Sam Winchester, Supernatural 14x17 (Default)
From: [personal profile] oldtoadwoman

my cylinder is not getting the chance to produce the power it should, and it’s gonna lead to long-term damage!

Hee!

Go get your man! ... go get him anyways

Right on, dad!

Re: ♥

Date: 2022-02-01 06:37 am (UTC)
ride_4ever: (TYK)
From: [personal profile] ride_4ever
Thank you kindly for reading and commenting...and for cheering on the ghost of Bob Fraser!

Date: 2022-01-29 02:44 am (UTC)
walgesang: a drawing of a humpback whale with wings (Default)
From: [personal profile] walgesang
Great twist on the prompts, MA! :D A fun peek into an unknown fandom too, nicely done!

Date: 2022-02-01 06:37 am (UTC)
ride_4ever: (TYK)
From: [personal profile] ride_4ever
Thank you kindly for reading and commenting! (This icon is a pic of Constable Benton Fraser, RCMP...the Fraser of my fic.)

Date: 2022-01-29 05:33 am (UTC)
glittering_git: (Default)
From: [personal profile] glittering_git
This was quite coherent!! I loved the structure of this, the way you defined terms with the commentary of the narrator. I know nothing about this pair except that it's a blond and brunette. which one is which, that's what I want to know haha

Date: 2022-02-01 06:41 am (UTC)
ride_4ever: (FK kiss ANIMATED)
From: [personal profile] ride_4ever
Thank you kindly for reading and commenting!

In the icon: the blond on the left is Detective Ray Kowalski and the brunet on the right is Constable Benton Fraser, RCMP.

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