ENTRY #8

Apr. 25th, 2017 05:07 pm
torino10154: Glass of firewhiskey (Firewhiskeyfic)
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Title: First Star I See Tonight
Author: [personal profile] tjs_whatnot
I am of legal drinking age in my region: (yes)
Pairing(s)/Characters/Fandom: Luna/Star Dust
Challenge: Luna, Centaru, black Lkae
Summary: I don’t even know man…
Rating/Warnings: Rish maybe…
Word count: 600
Author's Notes (if any): I can’t even look.

Luna wound the floweres stems around each other connecting them in a circle and placing them gently on the head of the centaur. He whinnied low in his throat.

Luna smiled. “Tobias,I think I should say, right from the start so there is to be no misunderstandings later. I will, under no cirumstances, be having sex with you.”

Tobias snorted. “Of course not. You are a human,” he shivered. “I have a reputation to uphold, people I have to face and how woud I be albe to look at the if I had had relations with a human?” He shivered again and Luna was starting to get offended. But then she remembered that she had started this line of conversation.

“So we’re on the same page?”

“Absolutely. I only want to watch.”

“So, watching humans ins’t beneith you?”

“Only a little.”

Luna studied him. She liked that her crown of fowers made him look ridiculous. It was easyier to not take his insults and high-falutingness seriously. She had forgotten this aout centaurs. But, honestly, it was worth it. She liked to be watched.

“Shall we begin?” he asked. She nodded and they both walked to the shore of the lake. She took off her robe and stood before the waves naked, the wind teasing and exciting the hairs on her arms. She looked over her shoulder to Tobias who laid in the sand on the shore, waiting.

Stepping into the fridig water set her whole body with goosebumps. She took a breath, letting the sensation work its way through her before she took another stpe, and another. She was up to her knees before she’d become accuustome to the cold. Or thought she was. When she dipped to her shoulders she gasped as all her blood seemed to freeze under her skin. The sensation was almost painful, but also titalating. She flatted on her back and moved her arms lazily in the water. The wind across her epxposed and damp nipples made her cry out.

“Are you ready?” Tobias asked.

“YEs!” Luna exclaimed. HEr body humming in anticipaton.

“Close your eyes,” Hhe ordered in the voice he had reserved for these moments alone.

She immediately did what she was told. Suddenly she was both out of her ody and inside it more than she’d ever been before. She saw and felt andtasted every fiber of herself, but she no onger felt like she was flouting in water, more like air, more like floating and flying at the same time.

There was a bubbling in her ears and sehr felt the water boil around her, not hot, just the popping and bursting against her sin.

“Now, open your eyes.” Again she did what she was told. “What do you see? What do you feel? Tell me.”

IT took a moemtn for hr to take it all inn. “Stars and moondust, planets and sueprnovas. I’m surounded by them, their shine, their brilliance. I can see the light dance within the stars, can feel them breath against mhy skin.”

“Ad hwo does that make hyou feel.?”

“ALive,” she whspered. “Exhilirated. Connected.” She took a deep breath, let it out, and with it, all the built up tension she hadn’t relized she’d been holding onto, that everyone is always holding onto until they have that moemtn, that out of body moment when they can realiease it all and just feel, just climax. Feel everything and nothing at all.

She closed her eyes again, spent and sleepy.

“Tobias?” she shipsered.

“Yes.”

“Thank you.”

“No, Luna dear, thank you.”

Date: 2017-04-25 11:07 pm (UTC)
From: [personal profile] rabbit_says
Just the kind of far out story that I imagine when I think of Luna :)

Date: 2017-04-25 11:22 pm (UTC)
sdk: A great white shark about to breach with a rainbow filter and text that reads sdk (Default)
From: [personal profile] sdk
Oh this is so perfectly Luna. Love the descriptions of her going into the water and everything. Also, I loved the bit about the flower crown helping her not take Tobias' insults seriously. And that she couldn't be upset because she brought up the whole sex talk in the first place LOL!

Date: 2017-04-25 11:32 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] lq_traintracks
I like the ethereal, sensual quality of this. It really suits both Luna and the centaur!

Date: 2017-04-26 01:02 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] bixgirl1
This was so completely Luna; strange and pretty. :)

Date: 2017-04-26 02:10 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] ruinsplume
Wow, I just love how cosmic this is, like maybe the author had a few hits of gillyweed along with their firewhisky, hmm?

It's so Luna, and so centaurish too, and the trip among the galaxies seemed exactly right for the Earth Day part of the prompt. I loved that they two of them had this very intimate connection that was orgasmic and yet not sexual in the usual way. This was Beautiful and different and lovely, MA!

Date: 2017-04-26 03:22 am (UTC)
reg_flint: LJ nettlebrew (snake collar)
From: [personal profile] reg_flint
So ethereal. 100% Luna. I can feel her so clearly here.

Also just as an aside: There was a bubbling in her ears and sehr felt the water boil around her, not hot, just the popping and bursting against her sin. the word "sehr" means "very" in German. So you know your writing was even better than you thought =)

Date: 2017-04-26 04:46 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] alisanne
This was lovely, very Luna-esque.
Quite psychedelic. Well done!

Date: 2017-04-26 05:43 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] icicle33
Luna was so perfectly Luna in this little fic. I loved the dreamlike quality to your writing, which fit perfectly with the prompt and Luna. Lovely job!

Date: 2017-04-27 06:54 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] digthewriter
This was great.

Date: 2017-04-28 07:31 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] lightofdaye
This is really sweet. A great way to incorporate the centaur prompts and not going full beast-sex! lol.

And as other have said it seems very in-character for Luna.

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