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firewhiskeyficTitle: Talk Less; Smile More
Author: jibbity-jabbity [Mod note: IDEK but that's not the creator's username LOL] akatjs_whatnot
I am of legal drinking age in my region: (yes/no) yes/ no/ maybe/ probably
Pairing(s)/Characters/Fandom: sev/remus ❤snupin I've missed you❤
Challenge/Prompts used: severus for die. The treaty? Weill see.
Summary: Song stuck in my head. Trying to write fic around it. Wheeeee!
Rating/Warnings: um… I'm writing the heading before I gery too fat gone. I'm sure there are many warnings you should probably hede. Just no specifics as of now.
Word count: more than one, probably less than um...1kish...prob
Author's Notes (if any): Also, I'm writing this on my phone as the computer was just TOO MUCH. This will nor ends Weill. My auto correct hayes me. Wheeeee!
"You every wonder if you are in ther wrong story?"
Remus looked up from where he was currently positioned between Severuses legs.
"Pardon?"
"Like you were suppressed to belong to a different creator, ro have a different story?"
Remus sighed. Obviously, they'd moved from the sexy times of this particular story and eye now going to get all meta and shit.
"I need a drunk."
Severus sat up, his erection totally forgotten in his need to articulate his arcsnic and sort of ridiculous point. "I'm serious. Like, what are we doing in this story? What's our point?"
"In this</ i> story? Or in the story this story originates? "
"Well, obviously nor this story. This story is ducked and has no fucking point (hey fucker, not cool! ) I mean, in the complete grand scheme of things. What's our point? "
"Well, you're an advesary and foe, onviously, and I'm a…. Well, mentor? I guess. I dinne know, maybe we're too be a warning? A tempis. This is what you can become Harry James Poet, if you don't change your ways, a brekken, sad, do nothing, feel nothing empty shell of a man, or the man whi tries to fuck him...unsuccessful more times then successful i must sadly add."
Severus smiles sadly. "I'm sorry, you're right. Let's forgery about our story and just fuck."
"Oh, if only our creator had lousy their ability to get to the naughty bits."
Severus pulled Tennis back to hin. "Maybe we don't need them. Maybe we'r can do this bit on our own."
*they do their bit. It is lovely*
Tennis lights the fag, takes a drag, hangs it to Severus.
"So, what were you yammering about early er? What life would you have if you didn't have this one?"
Severus took a lung Drag, held it and then released with a shrig.
"Let's wait until our storyteller gets back from the bathroom… again. "
*back*
"More. Just, have you ever thought abott if we could be more, if we had different stories?"
Remus thought about it. "Like, if you were The Sheriff of Nottingham?"
Severus laughed. "And you were Rockin Hood?"
"I am handy with a bow. Or maybe you could be a German terrorist who robs a Japanese building in an American city on Christmas Eve?"
"And you'd be the chain smoking- barefoot walking- wife beater wearing ex-cop foil?"
"Yipee-ki-aya motherfucker."
"Notice the theme?"
"Destined tuo be the villain"? Remus answered. "Maybe I could be the cillian in this story. Maybe I'm the God of War and you're a Amazonian princess with a mission…"
Severus smuggled into Remus, feeeeeeelings aroused again. "Perhaps. But maybe instead of talking more we'r could--."
"Talk less?"
"And smile more." Severus answered, weeping his tongue down the length of tennis body.
*did more more*
~finn~
Author: jibbity-jabbity [Mod note: IDEK but that's not the creator's username LOL] aka
tjs_whatnotI am of legal drinking age in my region: (yes/no) yes/ no/ maybe/ probably
Pairing(s)/Characters/Fandom: sev/remus ❤snupin I've missed you❤
Challenge/Prompts used: severus for die. The treaty? Weill see.
Summary: Song stuck in my head. Trying to write fic around it. Wheeeee!
Rating/Warnings: um… I'm writing the heading before I gery too fat gone. I'm sure there are many warnings you should probably hede. Just no specifics as of now.
Word count: more than one, probably less than um...1kish...prob
Author's Notes (if any): Also, I'm writing this on my phone as the computer was just TOO MUCH. This will nor ends Weill. My auto correct hayes me. Wheeeee!
"You every wonder if you are in ther wrong story?"
Remus looked up from where he was currently positioned between Severuses legs.
"Pardon?"
"Like you were suppressed to belong to a different creator, ro have a different story?"
Remus sighed. Obviously, they'd moved from the sexy times of this particular story and eye now going to get all meta and shit.
"I need a drunk."
Severus sat up, his erection totally forgotten in his need to articulate his arcsnic and sort of ridiculous point. "I'm serious. Like, what are we doing in this story? What's our point?"
"In this</ i> story? Or in the story this story originates? "
"Well, obviously nor this story. This story is ducked and has no fucking point (hey fucker, not cool! ) I mean, in the complete grand scheme of things. What's our point? "
"Well, you're an advesary and foe, onviously, and I'm a…. Well, mentor? I guess. I dinne know, maybe we're too be a warning? A tempis. This is what you can become Harry James Poet, if you don't change your ways, a brekken, sad, do nothing, feel nothing empty shell of a man, or the man whi tries to fuck him...unsuccessful more times then successful i must sadly add."
Severus smiles sadly. "I'm sorry, you're right. Let's forgery about our story and just fuck."
"Oh, if only our creator had lousy their ability to get to the naughty bits."
Severus pulled Tennis back to hin. "Maybe we don't need them. Maybe we'r can do this bit on our own."
*they do their bit. It is lovely*
Tennis lights the fag, takes a drag, hangs it to Severus.
"So, what were you yammering about early er? What life would you have if you didn't have this one?"
Severus took a lung Drag, held it and then released with a shrig.
"Let's wait until our storyteller gets back from the bathroom… again. "
*back*
"More. Just, have you ever thought abott if we could be more, if we had different stories?"
Remus thought about it. "Like, if you were The Sheriff of Nottingham?"
Severus laughed. "And you were Rockin Hood?"
"I am handy with a bow. Or maybe you could be a German terrorist who robs a Japanese building in an American city on Christmas Eve?"
"And you'd be the chain smoking- barefoot walking- wife beater wearing ex-cop foil?"
"Yipee-ki-aya motherfucker."
"Notice the theme?"
"Destined tuo be the villain"? Remus answered. "Maybe I could be the cillian in this story. Maybe I'm the God of War and you're a Amazonian princess with a mission…"
Severus smuggled into Remus, feeeeeeelings aroused again. "Perhaps. But maybe instead of talking more we'r could--."
"Talk less?"
"And smile more." Severus answered, weeping his tongue down the length of tennis body.
*did more more*
~finn~
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Date: 2020-02-03 05:59 pm (UTC)Using your phone and auto-correct was courageous.
I love the challenge part of the header. "Severus for die" indeed.
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Date: 2020-02-03 07:52 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2020-02-04 03:03 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2020-02-06 05:33 pm (UTC)And gosh, THE META IN THIS. :-----D Love me some amazing meta level fiction. And forgetting to close off your html - we've all been here. xD
Top moment for me has to be:
Let's forgery about our story and just fuck."
Also I love how you just skip over the smutty parts, like... how genius??? I'm terrible at writing smut, I should just start doing that from now on!
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Date: 2020-02-08 03:05 am (UTC)Wait, are you channeling Into the Woods?
Love how the very characters went philosophical and started thinking meta about their conditions from the very start. Also how halfway through the story Remus became Tennis and then I was imagining all kinds of weird things. And "Harry James Poet," oh my goodness.
Yipee-ki-yay-motherfucker made me laugh out loud (It's always good for a laugh).
And the "smile more." So sweet. So out of character, but great for Severus being in a different story.
hee!
Date: 2020-07-30 04:19 pm (UTC)Skimming old posts because I'm procrastinating (so many other things I need to be doing right now) and this was a delightful giggle.
favorite mental image: Severus Snape: Warrior Princess