I'm so glad the switching POVs worked! I ended up changing Bill's second section entirely to first person in the cleaned up version. Unfortunately lost my snow hieroglyphics though. LOL.
I'm so glad you liked the story! I know the prompts had nothing to do with Bill and Charlie but it was the first thing I thought of and then I couldn't shake it! :D
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Date: 2022-07-13 07:26 pm (UTC)I'm so glad you liked the story! I know the prompts had nothing to do with Bill and Charlie but it was the first thing I thought of and then I couldn't shake it! :D