There's something about the switching POVs and tenses that just works for this??? I mean rules were made to be broken! Especially writing rules :P But it definitely just compliments the flow of the story, the tenderness, the longing--I love how much pining there is even with all the fucking and damn, that fisting is super hot and so so intimate. I have to agree with Plum, I grinned at the \\\\\ because YES so fitting! But this was really beautiful and sweet and so hot!
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Date: 2022-07-08 04:23 am (UTC)