Date: 2017-04-26 01:50 am (UTC)
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This was both completely adorable and very hot! Just like the sex scene itself--adorable and hot, which is perfect for these young things.

I loved how the only reason Harry let Albus go camping was to get back at Draco, and that Ron gave them a non-magical tent (accidentally? or to get back at a Malfoy, I bet). And I loved how throughout the story, Albus is trying so hard to be a really smooooth sneaky Slytherin, and is just kind of doofusy, but gets what he needs in the end anyway! Nice work, and wow, who knew Albus's name would be so hard to spell? ; )
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