This is sort of... lovely, the second-person narrative! Suits the dreamy, tipsy mood in the safe warmth in the friends' company.
You lifft your glass a little and spare him a small wink, which is something Sirius used to do with you and you only realise it once you’ve done it yourself.
Everything’s nice when you’re not fighting for your life, and dying.
Beautiful!
Surprisingly, after the bigger break and the small hilarious breaks of authorial comments, the second person still works perfectly – even when there's no safe warmth but desire and guilt, which could be too embarrassing to share like this. Loved it!
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Date: 2020-07-29 12:24 pm (UTC)You lifft your glass a little and spare him a small wink, which is something Sirius used to do with you and you only realise it once you’ve done it yourself.
Everything’s nice when you’re not fighting for your life, and dying.
Beautiful!
Surprisingly, after the bigger break and the small hilarious breaks of authorial comments, the second person still works perfectly – even when there's no safe warmth but desire and guilt, which could be too embarrassing to share like this. Loved it!