Oh, wow, I love meta drunk!fic. Your running commentary on writing is hilarious, MA. And what a clever, interesting idea -- magic going out.
Meta lines I liked --
the way the cherry-ripe liqoeur (oh god, why did I try that) stains his full lips Haha! Why, indeed?
“What exactly has happened?” someone asks (because I’ve forgotten who’s at this party, but it sounds like Hermione maybe)/ Hermione-maybe asks. Great lines.
“Bloody hell,” says Susan, who might be gone, so yes, Katie actually.
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Date: 2020-07-29 01:43 am (UTC)Meta lines I liked --
the way the cherry-ripe liqoeur (oh god, why did I try that) stains his full lips
Haha! Why, indeed?
“What exactly has happened?” someone asks (because I’ve forgotten who’s at this party, but it sounds like Hermione maybe)/ Hermione-maybe asks.
Great lines.
“Bloody hell,” says Susan, who might be gone, so yes, Katie actually.