Date: 2020-02-04 05:37 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] paulamcg
Oh wow! This is almost too good – and not only for a drunken fic! I hardly ever manage to enjoy NC-17 sex (my bad – nothing wrong with high-rated sex scenes), but this one – after the amazing description of the encounter in the cold – felt just right and necessary in all its detail. You’ve also clearly kept your mind sharp and your eyes open until Harry closes hsi eyes, and you get only a bit reckless when Recklessly, Harry pussl out. In my interpretation Harry thinks about his love life and other relationships, and not only food when he ponders that Most of the shps are closed now. Finally you get even the transfiguration in and close the story with it so wonderfully that I realise only later you included the magic because of the prompt.
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