Daaaaaaaaamn! Okay, I have never found Tonks hot before (which is weird because I'm really into metamorphmagi/maguses?), but THIS! aasdfsldjfhfg! What the fuck did I just read??? I love your writing; it's like... I'm trying to decide. Sort of like this self-referential literature I read a lot for my undergrad. Not that this is self-referential, but you do some similar things with story-telling. Like, it's very post-modern: you get the idea for a metaphor or the character has a thought, and then you, the writer, make it real in the next sentence, so that fiction becomes reality instantly in a way that points out (subtly) that, hey, this is fiction and this is an author creating it as they write. Does that make sense? Anyway, I freaking LOVED that! And so many brilliant descriptions and turns of phrase!
And it was stupid hot omg! Fantastic. I ship it. :D
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Date: 2018-08-14 08:41 pm (UTC)And it was stupid hot omg! Fantastic. I ship it. :D