Wow this is gorgeous!! Even with the typos, and the rambling style, which the latter I think actually works really well for this anyway, it's just gorgeous. So many lines that I loved, how each kiss is different, how they all mean different things, and just exploring the relationship Sirius has with these people through these kisses, this intimacy. Just wow. I am blown away by this! I wish I could write this well sober, tbh!
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Date: 2017-11-08 04:20 am (UTC)