You managed to put the double brackets in the the story, I love that! The irony going through the whole story is amazing: here the guys sound like real people, constantly mocking each other, and I really liked that. But wait, is this a James x Peter that I read? And the sandwich is "resiourly" the sexiest metaphor I've ever read... MLMLMLMLML!
“ I’m going to go eat Pete’rs sandwich in the dorm. See yous.”
That sounds so natural :')
Oh and the kiss that made cigarettes disappear was just magic <3 Evanesco!
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Date: 2017-11-11 12:45 am (UTC)The irony going through the whole story is amazing: here the guys sound like real people, constantly mocking each other, and I really liked that.
But wait, is this a James x Peter that I read? And the sandwich is "resiourly" the sexiest metaphor I've ever read... MLMLMLMLML!
“ I’m going to go eat Pete’rs sandwich in the dorm. See yous.”
That sounds so natural :')
Oh and the kiss that made cigarettes disappear was just magic <3 Evanesco!