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Keeper of the Cocks ([personal profile] torino10154) wrote in [community profile] firewhiskeyfic2023-01-23 10:51 am
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ENTRY #5

Title: L'Inverno Arriva a Napoli
Author: [personal profile] ride_4ever
I am of legal drinking age in my region: Yes -- very much so!
Fandom: Goncharov (1973)
Pairing(s)/Characters: Goncharov/Katya, Goncharov/Andrey "The Banker" implied, Katya/Sofia implied
Challenge/Prompts used: I used ALL the prompts! They are: Hagrid, Forbidden Forest, Stripped Bare, Cuddling by the Fire, Ice and Snow, & "Guests, like fish, begin to smell after three days."
Summary: Winter comes to Naples…no, not the ice and snow…it’s that the Russian mafia comes to Italy.
Rating/Warnings: Explicit; no AO3-type warnings apply.
Word count: 426
Author's Notes: Anyone spot the two things from "The Sopranos" canon? (Not the general mafia thing...two things that are more specific.)
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Winter comes to Naples…no, not the ice and snow…it’s that the Russian mafia comes to Italy. More specifically, Goncharov comes to Naples and becomes Lo Straniero.

Goncharov and Yekaterina have a luxury apartment in the city of Naples and also an Amalfi Coast villa about a two-hour drive from Naples. The villa has a massive stone fireplace where they like to cuddle by the fire…although if Katya were to call it “cuddling” Goncharov would be derisive of the word. There are many words which Goncharov is concerned will lead to derision, and many actions in which Goncharov will engage but only in secret to avoid derision.

One of those actions is his going down on Katya. He loves to do it and she loves when he does it, but he has warned her “Don’t tell anyone about this. They think if you suck pussy you’ll suck anything. They think it’s a sign of weakness.”

Secretly, Goncharov likes to think of Katya’s lightly furred nether region as a “forbidden forest” which he stealthily invades. “Forbidden” and “stealth” are very arousing thoughts to him -- almost as arousing as his thoughts about the forbidden sucking and being sucked by Andrey “The Banker” Daddano.

He has Katya stripped bare as they lay in front of the villa’s fireplace, his thoughts twisting and turning between Katya and Andrey. “Focus! Focus!” he tells himself, pushing away thoughts of how Andrey lost his left eye and how Goncharov was complicit in that.

Goncharov momentarily allows himself to become lost in lapping at Katya’s velvet folds (never wondering if Sophia Ambrosini has been there, Katya carefully never having allowed him to have reason to wonder) and then, in that part of his brain, his amygdala, which is always scanning for threats, always assessing levels of danger and levels of safety, a warning arises: Bratva!

Yes, Bratva! The Amalfi Coast villa is meant to be a safe house, but nothing is truly safe from the best Bratva hitmen, and Hagrid “The Hairy Man” Brasi – one of those best -- has found them.

Katya – even though naked – has her knife close at hand as always (sometimes Goncharov likes a bit of knife-play) and has the presence of mind to throw the knife at Hagrid. She is skillful and hits his femoral artery, so that he quickly fatally bleeds out.

Katya is reluctant to take Goncharov’s attention away from continuing to tongue-fuck her, but she feels it’s necessary to say “Guests, like fish, begin to smell after three days…and dead guests often even sooner.”
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[personal profile] lightofdaye 2023-01-23 08:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh very nice and complete! I admired the way you got all the prompts in there despite writing in an entirely different fandom!

Bravo.
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[personal profile] ride_4ever 2023-03-14 12:16 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you kindly for these comments! <3
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dead guests often even sooner

[personal profile] oldtoadwoman 2023-01-24 03:54 am (UTC)(link)
Hagrid “The Hairy Man” Brasi

Love it! I would have not predicted a 400-ish word Goncharov fic would squeeze in all the prompts!

dead guests often even sooner

That last line!

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Re: dead guests often even sooner

[personal profile] ride_4ever 2023-03-14 12:17 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you kindly for these comments! <3
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[personal profile] sabethea 2023-01-24 04:46 pm (UTC)(link)
This is amazing. Very porny, very clever working in of the prompts, and a perfect last line.
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[personal profile] ride_4ever 2023-03-14 12:18 am (UTC)(link)
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[personal profile] paulamcg 2023-01-24 08:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, this is glorious! I love the creative way you've got the prompts in, for instance how you make use of Katya’s lightly furred nether region. And that there remains some kind of relaxed cosiness in the tone all through, even in the sentence that tells us how a knife is used!
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[personal profile] ride_4ever 2023-03-14 12:18 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you kindly for these comments! <3
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[personal profile] lq_traintracks 2023-01-25 12:05 am (UTC)(link)
SOMEONE WROTE GONCHAROV I AM DYING!! :DDD Fucking brilliant! Though I'm a little disappointed that Little Ricky didn't make an appearance, though so many people disregard that part of the film as "insignificant", including Scorsese himself. *shrug*

(I'm so tickled by this! Great job!!! <333 )
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[personal profile] ride_4ever 2023-03-14 12:25 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you kindly for these comments! <3

(And no disrespect to Little Ricky's place in Goncharov, but I was too drunk to expand the number of characters in this fic a short fic like this was by its nature shorter on number of characters.)
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[personal profile] sdk 2023-01-26 10:36 pm (UTC)(link)
I have yet to see this movie (I know, I know, I'm the last person on earth who hasn't watched this brilliant film) but I loved this even so! But seriously, I've been so fascinated with Goncharov ever since I first heard about it--and I was so freaking excited someone wrote for it for FWF, and I'm tickled pink by all of this. Incredible job with the prompts, loved all of the nods to 'fanon' or 'canon' (is there a difference??) and what a fantastic closing line!
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[personal profile] ride_4ever 2023-03-14 03:17 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you kindly for these comments and for modding! <3

So, have you seen the movie yet? Or perhaps at least seen the trailer?

And yeah, in Goncharov fandom the canon is fanon. *grin*
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[personal profile] songquake 2023-01-27 04:37 am (UTC)(link)
THat last line, though.
Remarkably coherent! Brevity is the soul of coherence?

And I love how you worked in all the prompts! Skillful way of getting Hagrid in!

Brava! (And bratva, I guess!)
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[personal profile] ride_4ever 2023-03-14 03:19 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you kindly for these comments! <3

(And LOL for working "bratva" into your comments.)
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[personal profile] ride_4ever 2023-03-14 03:40 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you kindly for these comments and for modding! <3

(And those extra points are appreciated. *sly grin*)
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[personal profile] verushka70 2023-01-31 05:17 am (UTC)(link)
*iz late to the party*
OMG! This is hysterical... and that you were furthermore coherent whilst getting absurdly toasted - nay, possibly trashed? given your next day email, lol! - AND got all the prompts in, in a GONCHAROV fic, is INCREDIBLE! kudos!!
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[personal profile] ride_4ever 2023-03-14 03:42 am (UTC)(link)
TYK for coming here to read and comment even though you weren't able to participate in this round. (BTW, next round is April 1st and 2nd.)