torino10154: Glass of firewhiskey (Firewhiskeyfic)
Keeper of the Cocks ([personal profile] torino10154) wrote in [community profile] firewhiskeyfic 2024-04-19 11:46 am (UTC)

This was both hilarious and poignant.

This line, after a very clean opening, nearly did me in.

He'd barely muttered tje correction imder jos breatj as je waoved pver tje bartemder fpr amptjer rpimd out of habit.

Clearly the booze hit. LOL

But yeah, that was actually quite moving in the end. Nicely done.

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