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paulamcg ([personal profile] paulamcg) wrote in [community profile] firewhiskeyfic 2023-01-24 08:19 pm (UTC)

Ah, young Marauders at fwf!

I love that Sirius's fixation shows in how long the section consisting of his thoughts goes on. And each Marauder's reaction to the sight in the forest and to the coming out it provoked!

And this:
“I don’t remember things clearly when I’m wolfed out, you lot know that,” said Remus slowly, pulling pants on rather to Sirius’s disappointment, “but… Hagrid?”
also because it's lovely your Remus doesn't fully lose his human consciousness when wolfed out (love the term).

And Sirius's adorably insecure erm nos!

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