I think with this round I really noticed that there are two kinds of coherence. There's the simple drunkenness factor but there's also the story factor, meaning did the story make sense? Was there a beginning middle end? That kind of coherence. I don't think that applied to your entry, honestly, but when I was tabulating votes, I got the impression that's how some people voted in that category.
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I think with this round I really noticed that there are two kinds of coherence. There's the simple drunkenness factor but there's also the story factor, meaning did the story make sense? Was there a beginning middle end? That kind of coherence. I don't think that applied to your entry, honestly, but when I was tabulating votes, I got the impression that's how some people voted in that category.