1. This is an excellent intro story for the many FWF readers who don’t watch/read DS. Just, you gave us everything we would need to make this story work, and I really appreciate it. If you or big on the HP fandom, I hope those of us who wrote HP did as good a job showing you who our people are to each other.

2. The structure of this is really tight, first building so much sexual tension over CAR PARTS and then giving us some great levity with a dash of “maybe they’ll get off their asses and knock boots already” hope. Excellent work, MA!