First, I LOVE that you included your brainstorm—which demonstrates at least an attempt at being coherent at the start! Rather than the rambling steam of consciousness bullshit I usually write.

“ and he was trying to do things that’d make Harry laugh because he hadn’t been laughing enough.” I love this for them. Draco is such a good boyfriend here!

I mean really, you’ve done an amazing job at capturing the glompy sweetness of this pairing and this particular dynamic, especially in its newness. I’ve got heart eyes over here. Kudos to you, MA!