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cunning as a weevil ([personal profile] firethesound) wrote in [community profile] firewhiskeyfic 2018-08-15 09:22 pm (UTC)

omg I love that this just goes right for the smut!! My headcanon for this pairing is that they don't do a whole lot of dancing round each other before they get it together, but this was like. Thirty seconds after they cross paths they're in bed together, haha. I love it :D The typos in this just had me giggling too, "blgotis and perfect" as others have said, but I also liked "Oh fuckm eys." which for some reason my brain translated as "Oh fuck my eyes" the first time I read it and I was like... WHAT. He did WHAT to her eyes?? And then I realized it's supposed to be "oh fuck yes." which makes way more sense lol. Then that ending was wonderful, I loved that it ended on a promise of more <3 <3 <3

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