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cunning as a weevil ([personal profile] firethesound) wrote in [community profile] firewhiskeyfic 2018-08-15 05:45 pm (UTC)

Holy fuck this was good, fantastic use of 2nd person POV and the fucking language in here!! Parts of it read practically like poetry. Honestly I'm in awe that this was written in a single evening, never mind there being alcohol involved too!! I absolutely loved the way you wrote Ginny, resentful of the space the rest of the world tries to force her into, of constantly being overshadowed and trying to make do with handmedowns, and the almost defiant way she reaches out and excels despite it all. There were so many lines in this that were quoteworthy that I'd practically be copy-pasting this whole thing if I were to try to get them in the comment, but one that I especially loved was the description of the Hogwarts tie slinking down between the breasts of girls in uniform. All the background characters were amazing, and the smut was burning hot. Love love love all the other pairings and how each of them seem so comfortable and at ease with each other, like the moment of Ron and Hermione holding hands, or Harry laughing at something Draco says, and it makes a lovely contrast to the way Ginny and Pansy are still circling each other, makes what they've got going seem even more intense by comparison <3 <3 <3

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