Um, WOW! Holy shit, this is, like, amazing! I wish I could write like this sober, truly. LOL!!! Oh man, this was so painful! And beautiful and raw and unf. Man, this is a really great story. In some ways the drunkenness actually lends to Sirius' character and this interchange and how horribly fated this is and how they don't know. Ugh so good! Because of the drunkenness of the writing, too, it almost sounded Beat to me, like Kerouac or something. I just thought that quality was so right for this pairing and these circumstances. Fantastic job!

And fuckous! LOL!!! Omg fuckous! :D